We’re back again at dverse and the haibun challenge this week is to choose a quote for inspiration from Grace’s list. And I can’t resist an e e cummings poem so here goes. For those joining for the first time: A haibun is a paragraph of prose followed by a haiku poem.
“Yours is the light by which my spirit’s born: – you are my sun, my moon, and all my stars.” e e cummings
They said she’s too flighty, got her head up there in the clouds, silly girl, forgets her mittens on the bus, and her homework in her desk. Crumpled papers. Tie a string through that winter coat. They said she’s an old soul, you’ll catch her dreaming, her nose in a book, she’s late or lost, no one ever knows for sure. She’s got those wide eyes, far away look in them, humming to herself. You lead her home.
Orion’s belt sways
On a wild and wondrous night
when our souls collide
Yes! Love this
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Beautiful.. loved it.
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What a lovely character of the girl ~ I specially love that she’s an old soul but she’s still dreaming ~ The haiku sums up the wondrous relationship and reinforces “You lead her home” ~
Thanks for joining Haibun Monday and wishing you happy week Trish ~
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thank you and thanks for hosting!
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Love it all, and particularly the haiku.
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Keep her wise and wild and dreaming – I think I have a boy like that who exasperates me even when I love him to bits.
A tender, loving write with a wry smile in the corner of your mouth!
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it’s hard to keep up with the free spirits
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A bit of whimsy in this…love those books, myself. What else do we need?
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indeed – what else is required – thanks for commenting!
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I really love the contrasts in the girl… so young and wise at the same time… playful and old at the same time… a perfect soul.. I love it.
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Thank you! — we all need to keep our old souls
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I always love to revisit… and yes the contrast here is wonderful
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SinG hiGh
sunG Low
fAiry
tales
Spoke
wheels
spake
SonG..
tUrn oN…
Sun and Moon
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leT tHeir bE liGht..:)
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You’ve described a compelling young girl and ended with a lovely haiku.
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thank you — there’s a little bit of all of us in that young girl dreaming!
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I really like the picture you ‘painted’ with your words of this girl! As you have said about, there IS a bit of all of us in that young girl.
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I wonder what she’s reading…
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Probably Anne of Green Gables 🙂
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Such good taste. 🙂
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I really like the way you have structured this Trish. I think the haibun is a demanding yet fabulous way to write…..Michael
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Thanks so much and for visiting!
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